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Madonna's avatar

Beautifully written Rohith.

You've perfectly described the ache and longing that comes with loving someone who's no longer by your side.

Rohith's avatar

Thankyou so much mado for reading this.. it means a lot

Mindful Glow With Daniela's avatar

This is incredibly beautiful — it feels like longing woven into silk. The way you write about memory, touch, and the ache that stays after love has slipped through the room… it lingers. There’s such tenderness in your imagery, but also a quiet grief that settles beneath each line. It’s the kind of poem that doesn’t just tell a story — it haunts gently, in the way only real connection can. Thank you for sharing something so raw and exquisitely felt. 🤍

Rohith's avatar

Thank you so much for your kind words. It means a lot to me that the poem touched you. I’m glad you felt the feelings I tried to share. Your support really inspires me to keep writing